Looking at your retention graph that is normal.  For my main channel tutorial style videos theres always a dip at the front like that.  Here is a recent video and you can see I have a similar dip. You can see the grey is my typical video so this is performing normal for me.

Theres a feature to upload photos here in the community.  Go ahead and upload the photo here so we don't have to link out to see it 

Look at what happens at those dips.  Did you say something or did the video slow down?  Use the dips of a guide on where to look and see what happened to cause people to leave 

Jonathan Richey Good idea.  You can add in all your social channels to get a big overview of growth of your brand overall

Jonathan RicheyTake this and customize it for your income and expenses.  I like this format because I see a quick overview of everything and I can see whats working or not when it comes to income sources 

Here's a link to it: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/197HdKDn7aTz4lXbTrrLxcO5koG4jQn2G_RGjkBNBmCo/edit?usp=sharing

You can just heart the response or say something like "Thanks!" to acknowledge their comment.  If you have something that you can add on then write a little more

I'll add that to my list.  Composition, Perspective and Creative Camera Angles 

I have a big summer of shoots ahead of me so I'm working to get more content out right now before all that starts :) 

You can search each one of these titles.  Some are in courses some are stand alones.  I'm working on better sorting features so that you can find content easier